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(An Experiment) Impressions Of Victor (1 of 12)

by "Alaric" <alaricmc@[EMAIL PROTECTED] > May 12, 2008 at 11:20 PM

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IMPRESSIONS OF VICTOR (1 of 12)

ABDUL SURESH, Shop Owner:
No. I did not like him.

He was one of those men who find humour in discomfort. When I think of
him, 
I think, "You were not a decent man." Even though you should not think ill

of the dead, I think this. Whenever he came in my shop, he had an insult
for 
me. "You have any milk that is still in date, Abdul?" Or, "Poisoned anyone

with your ham this week, Abdul?" And I said nothing, because I am not a
man 
for trouble. I run a good shop. A fair shop.

That day?

He said nothing. No joking that day. He was sweating, and it was not warm.

He came to the counter and Mrs Mukhtar was before him in the line. She was

trying to find the right change. So impatient he was - I could sense it. 
Moving foot to foot. I tried to ignore this behaviour, but it was
difficult. 
He was holding his purchases against his chest, but they were too many for

him to hold comfortably, and he adjusted them, and the gun fell from
inside 
his jacket. He knelt to pick it up, and I saw in his eyes the challenge. 
"You feel you should make something of this, Abdul?" And of course, I did 
not. I have my wife and mother upstairs. Two daughters. I said, "Take
those 
things and go." But he would not. He insisted that he would pay. So he
paid, 
and I called the police. Four hours, before you came. He was dead. Others 
were dead. She was dead. What more could I do? I told you, and you did not

come.

His purchases?

String - a big ball. Lighter fuel. Candles. Other things. I can't
remember.

His wife was a beautiful lady. A polite lady. Every morning, she came in
for 
her cigarettes. I will miss her.
 




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(An Experiment) Impressions Of Victor (1 of 12)
"Alaric" <al  2008-05-12 23:20:18 
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Wind River <wind_river  2008-05-12 23:47:36 
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"Alaric" <al  2008-05-13 16:53:17 
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"Alaric" <al  2008-05-13 17:20:37 
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Wind River <wind_river  2008-05-13 23:34:55 
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Pensandpad <pensandpad  2008-05-23 10:09:12 
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"Alaric" <al  2008-05-23 19:38:54 
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